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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together Do you agree or disagree?

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It is generally believed that
music
 is the best way to eliminate gaps between people that belonging to various
background
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backgrounds
. I agree with that those people as
music
 is soul of
life it
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life, it
 plays
vital role
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a vital role
 in our modern world.
To begin
 with, rhythm and tone of singer may appeal
for
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to
 people
living an other country
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living in another country
living another country
 with different
culture
 and language. It is needless to say that they can connect with
diversity
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diverse
music
 without knowing about their content.
For instance
, Happy
birth day
an anniversary of the day on which a person was born (or the celebration of it)
birthday
 it is very well-known song all around the word and no matter what language you speak to, it has got
very simple arrangement
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a very simple arrangement
 and lyric. Having same interest of
music
 assists people to become close to each other.
Moreover
, with
advent
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the advent
 of technology
every thing
all things
everything
 has changed dramatically and the
music
 industry in not an exception, nowadays, there are a lot of clips that present the traditional
culture
 of
different country
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different countries
a different country
.
For example
, by listening the song of
this
 is America people comprehend more about the life of black people and gun violence over them.
However
, it is not denied that, the elderly people or people
with interesting
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with, interesting
 to listen classical
music
 that like to know the exact meaning of
song
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the song
 may rather reluctant to listen
music
 is
stranger
having strength or power greater than average or expected
stronger
 for them, because of that reason, the
music
 which is smoothing, perceptible gives rise to build up
relationship
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a relationship
relationships
the relationship
 between people. In conclusion, it appears to me
music
 can
a bridge
reduce in scope while retaining essential elements
abridge
culture gap
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the culture gap
 and play
significant role
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a significant role
to
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for
 unit people of different
culture
 together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
  • catalyst
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