Some people say that protecting the environment is the government responsibility. Other belive that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both view and give your own opinions.

Nature place an important role in our life. It has given us several valuable
resources but
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resources, but
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
matter of concern for us that the human beings are continuously ignoring the depletion of valuable resources.
Although
some people believe that it is government's duty to take care of the
environment
, other think that individuals should responsible for it. To embark on, It is
Matter
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a matter
a Matter
of deep concern that
environment
polluted very fast because,
Today numerous
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Today, numerous
vehicle travel on the road and it is
increase
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increasing
the
pollution
day by day. Some people think that if human being starts taking Small efforts it can make a gigantic difference as people avoid purchasing products with excess packaging, they did not throw the waste material on the road and do not burn the plastic. As a
ramifications
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ramification
, a small
dicision
an army unit large enough to sustain combat
division
decisions
discussion
of human beings can help in
control
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controlling
the
pollution
.
Furthermore
, the government should take a big decision, which can help to save the
environment
. They ban diesel cars which create the
pollution
and they should ban that thing which
is increase
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has increased
increases
more
pollution
.
Government
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The government
has in a better
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has a better
position so they take a big
steps
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step
and protect the
environment
. To conclude, the alarming level of
pollution
is a shameful example of
collective failure
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the collective failure
a collective failure
of
system
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the system
. We are all in
this
together, so let us end
this
blame game and find a solution collectively.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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