Parents, usually mothers, stay at home to look after their families. People believe that for this they should receive a salary from the government. Do you agree or disagree and why?

Women often

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their careers for raising their children or taking care of

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advanced in years; ('aged' is pronounced as two syllables)

older

people at

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. Some people believe that the

government

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should financially assist those women as a reward. I strongly oppose the idea as

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will adversely affect the economy and

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working women class. I shall elaborate my stance with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.

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with, providing some sort of monetary assistance to the women staying

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will put a tremendous burden on the economy. Countries like India and Pakistan are already struggling to fight against major issues

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as poverty and food supply,

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approach will add an extra financial burden. According to the recent research of the UN,

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the poverty ratio

in the developing countries has doubled as compared to the past decade.

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, the

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should focus on eradicating bigger problems rather than providing unemployment allowance to mothers. To elucidate my stance

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, the initiative of awarding housewives will bring

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among working women. Those women are struggling hard to keep a balance with house chores and office tasks. They would be inclined to sit at

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and receive allowances

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of going out and making any effort to earn money. Eventually, the

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would end up paying all stay-

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-mothers.

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, there are many families in the UK and USA that take unemployment allowance from the

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over false medical reasons.

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idea will encourage people to stay at

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more and earn less. To summarize, the idea of financially assisting mothers is not rational from any aspect. The

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can assist these mothers in the form of insurance or free medical. The

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should

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encourage housewives to invest their spare time in online jobs and earn money while staying at

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.