People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

when
Suggestion
When
staying in a huge
city
, people are
encountring
come together
encountering
a lot of daily difficulties. Local
authoroties
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
should encourage people to live in towns situated into
periphery
Suggestion
the periphery
of the cities.
This
essay will focus on some of theses problems with
explinations
a statement that makes something comprehensible by describing the relevant structure or operation or circumstances etc.
explanations
form
a giver or sender
from
my personal point of view.
To begin
, living in large cities which is usually
corwded
overfilled or compacted or concentrated
crowded
is making the transfer from
one
point to another more difficult.
for
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For
exmaple
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
: going from work to home in
large
Suggestion
a large city
large cities
city
could take
one
hour, while in small
city
it could take around 15 minutes. Another problem is, when living in a grand
city
, the social interaction will be less, since there is a lot of people rushing for
thier
of them or themselves
their
own reasons, and they usually don't have time to speak
one
to another. I think that, government administration should motivate people moving into regional towns for many reasons, and for me, the most important
one
is Health. Moving to a small town will be helpful in term of
lowring
darkened by clouds
lowering
the stress and the noise, and
hence
it will be reflected
on
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in
the mental health.
a
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A
proof of
this
point is a study form the New England Journal of medicine in 2017 which showed that when followed
thier
of them or themselves
their
diagnosed patients with depression, they found that 50% of them were treated with no
midications
(medicine) something that treats or prevents or alleviates the symptoms of disease
medications
medication
modifications
, and they found that the only reason was they moved from large cities to a small
towns
Suggestion
town
. To conclude, when facing
strugles
an energetic attempt to achieve something
struggles
in large cities, people should take in
considration
the process of giving careful thought to something
consideration
, moving to a small,
quite
with little or no activity or no agitation ('quiet' is a nonstandard variant for 'quietly')
quiet
city
. Government must help and motivate people to move to regional towns.

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