Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.

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first sentence
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the first sentence
of task. Some people say that the only
reason
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of learning a foreign
language
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is in order to
travel
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or
work
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in
foreign country
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a foreign country
foreign countries
. I think people must not think like that. Because
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the only reason
reason
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of learning foreign languages. Of course, I agree with that learning a foreign
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is a one of the main
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reasons
of
travel
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and
work
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. So, it is important for their comfort
travel
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or to find a job in easy way. If some people say
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the only reason
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of learning of foreign languages, I think it
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depends
their current personal situation. If they concentrate or if they prepare go to abroad for
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or
work
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and their main problem is
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, of course they will understand only that, foreign
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is only
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to
go to abroad. The
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sentence of task is others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign
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think
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thought
. People must not forget that, they need to learn foreign languages for different reasons.
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, due to find reading materials, to read books, magazines and news, to follow technological news
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innovations etc. Because it can be, their
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is not rich/fit for deep learning.
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, maybe speaking
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more than two, three languages are
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a hobby
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, he/she has interest to
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any
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, due to
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reason
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he/she would
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like to learn
. In conclusion, I think people must learn foreign languages for everything, not only for
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, for
work
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, for education, for entertainment etc. Because it is time of globalization and nearly everything going on international level.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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