Some say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their spare time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that parents should motivate offsprings to participate in all

group

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activities to utilise their free

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, whilst a few people think that children should

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find out

ways by themselves.

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I will give my own perspective about the advantages of

group

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activites

any specific behavior

activities

.

Group

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activities are always conducted by skilled people with the aim to improve the creativity and imagination in children.Most of the

group

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events like personality

development

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, summer camps focused on identifying the real talents inside each child and helps them to overcome stage fear and shyness.

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, it inculcates the values of empathy, tolerance and

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team spirit

among the

children which

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children, which

will be a good asset in their social life.

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Further more

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, these

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types

of events diverted kids from spending

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infront

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in front

of the gadgets and television and

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enhance their overall

physcial

involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit

physical

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as well.

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, around 80% of the parents in UAE sent children in the yearly summer and spring camps having different physical and creative activities to enhance the mental and physical

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of kids.

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, others think that it is better to leave offspring to

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find out

ways to engage themselves in their free

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.The most compelling reason is that

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children might not be comfortable with the organised and strict atmosphere of

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activities and

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they may feel distracted in their free

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also

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.When children

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are given

will be given

the opportunities to do innovative or creative works

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they feel a sense of

fulfillment

a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

fulfilment

and self

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reliance

, which in turn can make wonders which would be a remarkable event in their whole life.

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, recently a school boy got

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a reward

the reward

and appreciation from

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Facebook

for finding a major security issue and as per the student it was

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happening

only because of the freedom he got from his parents to do research works in

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the internet

. In conclusion

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I believe that children

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find out

ways to occupy themselves has some benefits.

Hoever I

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However, I

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am inclined to believe that planned activities always enhance the

in-born

present at birth but not necessarily hereditary; acquired during fetal development

inborn

talents and improve the overall physical and mental

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of kids under the supervision of skilled people.