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In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life. Do you agree or disagree?

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Actually i
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Actually, I
Actually I
 disagree with
this
 idea. It is not easy to
product
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produce
 something useful or good.
For example
; in most countries, people
can not
can not
cannot
 reach the
technology
 if they are not going to buy a these multinational
companies
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companies'
company's
products
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product
. When you did not reach the
technology
then
 you can not
product
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produce
 goods useful for
this
 century. Some people say these companies
are just forcing
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are just forced
will just be forced
 people to buy their products with advertising. But it is quite normal for me. When
you
of you or yourself
your
product
 something useful you have to believe your
product
 and you should make a huge advertisement.
Otherwise no
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Otherwise, no
 one can find and they
can not
can not
cannot
 buy your products. I believe that some products are very useful
for
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in
 daily life.
For
example Apple
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example, Apple
 is a multinational company and they are
producted
make a prediction about; tell in advance
predicted
produced
protected
 Apple Watch. When people get
this
 watch, they can see their blood pressure, heart health etc. Some of the countries
permiting
consent to, give permission
permitting
 to buy other countries products. Apple is
American company
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an American company
 and Huawei is
Chinese company
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a Chinese company
.
Goverment
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The government
Government
 of China is permitted to buy Apple’s products. They are in a
technology
 war right now. But it is not a bad war. They are forcing
themself
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
 to
product
 better goods. Samsung did same watch with Apple and
then
 they forced Apple to
product
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produce
producing
new and better watch
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a new and better watch
. In conclusion, it is undoubtedly
true we
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true, we
can not
can not
cannot
 resist with
technology
. Multinational companies can reach
technology
 so easily and
then
 they can
product
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produce
 useful goods. These products are seriously raising our quality of life.
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