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Lone travelling and travelling with companions both have their pros and cons. Discuss and state your preference

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The question of travelling alone or with companions is a matter of individual preference. In today's world, people
travel
 from
one
 place to another for various purposes like wok, recreation or vacation.
Besides
 work tours, travelling generally is
such
 an experience wherein people get rest and
relaxation
Suggestion
relax
, enjoy and discover new things, and make new friends. Travelling with friends allows
one
 to share the challenges and experiences of
travel
. By sharing costs of travelling,
one
 tends to save money
also
. Still, I believe in travelling alone because you have complete independence. It is a great opportunity to analyse your inner self and enjoy the nature's beauty. It inspires you to meet new people and give freedom to live and
travel
 in your own way. It
also
 gives you time to catch up with reading, which
one
 has to skip in
this
 fast-paced life. But, many people get sick even while thinking of travelling alone. When you
travel
 alone, you get bored easily.
Furthermore you
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Furthermore, you
 need to me very responsible and alert. You may have to regret if you get bad health or any emergency or mishap. You should have proper knowledge about the new place like culture, weather, food, climate and other facilities. It is advisable to be well prepared in advance for
such
 a
travel
. I myself prefer to always
travel
 in a group, as it gives a chance to make new friends. It is
also
 safer to be in
group
Suggestion
a group
the group
 at a new place. It
also
 gives opportunity to learn new things from others.
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