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university students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is a growing trend for university students joining overseas exchange programmes during their studies. Despite the possibility of physical danger when being alone and a high cost of living overseas, students can advance their foreign
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 and adopt into different cultures during their stay. In my opinion, students would be ultimately benefited from
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 lifetime experience in studying overseas which surpass the disadvantages. Students are able to learn and practice foreign
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 on a daily basis, as well as exposure to another culture during studying overseas. They will speak to locals from all walks of life and with
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 intensity of practice, it allows students to pick up the dialect more effectively.
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, students would have the opportunity in participating cultural events which enhance their understanding of the country.
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, when I studied in the UK, I learn slangs from local people that are hardly used in class; whereas participating in local festivals is the quickest ways for me to get to know the importance and symbolic meanings behind certain rituals.
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, studying in a foreign country for a longer term allows quicker learning in
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 as well as enhancing learning through cultural experiences which are both beneficial to students. Number of students studying abroad has escalated recently.
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 generates new opportunities in
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 development so as cultural experiences for the students with risk of personal harm and financial burden. Ultimately,
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 learning experience would bring more benefits to the students compared to the drawbacks from it.
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