Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Physical activity is very important to lead a healthy and balanced

life

. We have to put efforts in every capacity, to do it regularly, in order to sustain a healthy mind and body. Some people prefer to do a small amount of exercise, to make themselves physically involved in some

work

while others pay no attention

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essay will provide the reasons that why people don't do physical activity and

also

highlight the possible measures to overcome

this

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a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations

mindset

Firstly

, the impact of modern technology is putting emphasis on a man to function like a

robort

a mechanism that can move automatically

robot

rabbit

rowboat

This

pressure is leading to high stress levels, increasing

work

pressures, never ending deadlines and more

work

commitments. These all are reasons which does not let focus on their well being, whatever the time they have they will dedicate to their

work

as it is the need of the hour if they doesn't

work

according to the need

then

what happens to their family.

Secondly

, sedentary lifestyle is the main reason for no exercise. Whenever the person is free he spends his time watching his mobile or television or playing games on

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which will surely lead to

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will lead

towards happy and

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towards a happy and

prosperous

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for example

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example, when

he went from the office all the remaining day he spent going on a recreation centre with us daily and we do exercise daily and have fun with kids. So, what we are

doing we

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doing, we

are enforcing a positive style of living a balanced

life

and we are teaching our kids that how

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it is

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this

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surely we have to face adverse circumstances.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Time constraints
Sedentary lifestyle
Passive leisure activities
Workplace wellness programs
Active commuting
Subsidized
Public awareness
Health benefits
Incentivizing
Accessible public spaces

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