Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
Physical activity is very important to lead a healthy and balanced
life
. We have to put efforts in every capacity, to do it regularly, in order to sustain a healthy mind and body. Some people prefer to do a small amount of exercise, to make themselves physically involved in some work
while others pay no attention on
it. Suggestion
to
This
essay will provide the reasons that why people don't do physical activity and also
highlight the possible measures to overcome this
mind set
.
a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations
mindset
Firstly
, the impact of modern technology is putting emphasis on a man to function like a robort
. a mechanism that can move automatically
robot
rabbit
rowboat
This
pressure is leading to high stress levels, increasing work
pressures, never ending deadlines and more work
commitments. These all are reasons which does not let focus on their well being, whatever the time they have they will dedicate to their work
as it is the need of the hour if they doesn't work
according to the need then
what happens to their family.
Secondly
, sedentary lifestyle is the main reason for no exercise. Whenever the person is free he spends his time watching his mobile or television or playing games on psp's
which will surely lead to a vessel that carries passengers or freight
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high
obesity level. Suggestion
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On the other hand
, we need to be physically active and healthy to enjoy a work
life
balance. This
will lead towards happy and
prosperous Suggestion
towards a happy and
life
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for example
, if I take my husband's example when
he went from the office all the remaining day he spent going on a recreation centre with us daily and we do exercise daily and have fun with kids. So, what we are Accept comma addition
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doing we
are enforcing a positive style of living a balanced Accept comma addition
doing, we
life
and we are teaching our kids that how life
is meant to be live. Moreover
, its
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,
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so that we could make the world a better place to live.
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, and if people
dont
follow the protocols on which God has designed us do not
don't
then
surely we have to face adverse circumstances.Submitted by shezamajidh on
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