On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter. - describe the item you lost - explain how you lost it - tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter with a disconsolate feeling, as I lost my watch during my vacation. My claim# AB21348. During my recent trip to Vegas along with my family
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weekend, to my great astonishment, the trip ended with losing my Rolex watch.
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the original dial had four diamonds, I had to customize it by adding two more to it, thereby, incrementing the cost
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had the finishing done with extra gold material, as it had silver straps on it. While accompanying my family to a restaurant
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Downtown, I placed the watch on the table during my lunch
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and left the place without picking it. Upon calling and enquiring the restaurant staff, they denied having spotted
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the watch on my table. As I was always fascinated about owning a Rolex, I am afraid
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the thought of losing it. I would like you to reimburse the price of it, as the agreement policy had
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refund on it. Looking forward
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response from you. Your's sincerely, Nishanth

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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