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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie chart illustrates the average Australian household
energy
use
 and
percentage
 of greenhouse gas
emissions which
Accept comma addition
emissions, which
 result from
this
energy
use
 respectively. The pie chart about Australian household
energy
use
 provides information about the amount of
energy
 used for 6 different sectors and the pie chart about
percentage
 of greenhouse gas
emissions which
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emissions, which
 result from
this
energy
use
 explain about the
percentage
 of
green
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
house
gas
Suggestion
gases
. In average household
energy
 42% of
energy
 is used for heating in general and 30% of
energy
to
Suggestion
for
in
 water heating. 15% of
energy
 for other appliances and 7% of
energy
 for refrigeration. 4% of
energy
 for lighting and 2% for cooling, heating in general occupies the highest
percentage
 while compared to others. In
percentage
 of greenhouse gas
emissions which
Accept comma addition
emissions, which
 result from
this
energy
 32% the of
green
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
house
 gas is used
to
Suggestion
for
 water heating, 28% the of
green
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
house
 gas other appliances. 15% of the
green
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
house
 gas for heating and 14% of the gas for refrigeration. 15% of the
green
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
house
 gas for lighting and 3% for cooling, other appliances occupies the highest
percentage
.

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