An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

There has been a vast rise in the number of kids having

high body mass index

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a higher body mass index

higher body mass index

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which, if

not checked on time, will result in chronic diseases and

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, high medical expenses. Easy access of fast-food and less

excerise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

are the main causes for

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and it can be solved by some crucial steps taken by parents and governments. As compared to the past, children are consuming more

readymade

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ready made

food and lack basic nutrients.

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, they have been eating Maggies, noodles, pizza which contains only the high calories and minimal proteins or vitamins.

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is because modern isolated families have no one to stay at home and cook healthy as well as tasty food for their babies; both the mom and dad are doing a job or business.

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,

advent

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the advent

of technology has gifted the new generation with electronic gadgets like,

vedio

the visible part of a television transmission

video

games, mobiles, LCD. So, they tend to be addicted of these equipments and avoid playing in outside.

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Ultimately, all

these leads to increase fat in

body

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the body

and gather low density cholesterol and lack vital nutrients.

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, at later ages, they can face diseases like obesity,

diabitis

a polygenic disease characterized by abnormally high glucose levels in the blood; any of several metabolic disorders marked by excessive urination and persistent thirst

diabetes

mellitus, high blood pressure and sometimes cardiac disease. Of course, those medical conditions require costly medicines and expensive treatments. Prevention is always better than cure. So if parents control their kid's obesity at

very early state

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a very early state

, they can secure their children's health. For that, they

have spare

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have spared

some time from

thier

of them or themselves

their

busy schedule to make healthy breakfast, lunch or dinner at home only which is free from

artifacts

a man-made object taken as a whole

artefacts

flavours and essence.

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Also governments

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Also, governments

can help here by making

ban

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a ban

on fast-food store near schools.

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Also governments

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Also, governments

should encourage various outdoor games and arrange competitions on

state

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the state

and national level and promote it by utilising fame of

sportspersons

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, so children are attracted towards games and will start to do

excerise

the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit

exercise

exercises

to remain fit for competitions. To conclude,

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recent modern culture leads to increase

number

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the number

of obese children, and has a risk to

thier

of them or themselves

their

health and expenditure on older age, that can be minimised by taking careful measures by parents and governments after checking the reasons stated in the paragraphs.