Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Nowadays different sort of
adds
a public promotion of some product or service
ads
are there
on
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for
the media to lure people and in promoting there product companies
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
forget about the norms of that
culture
for whom they are making those adds. I am personally against all those uncivilised adds on media which can harm the
inetersts
a sense of concern with and curiosity about someone or something
interests
of any
culture
.
This
essay will discuss the potential
damages these
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damages, these
adds
a public promotion of some product or service
ads
are
making
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made
on the cultures using examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate points and support claims.
Firstly
, every
society
has a limit to see the
type
of
content
on media.
Thats
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That's
why a
type
of expression is acceptable in one
culture
but thought as obscene in another
society
because of the norms on which that
culture
is based.
For example
, according to a research done by Oxford University in the year 2015
on
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in
the matter of
type
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the type
of
content
showcased in
mdeia
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
adds and it is psychologically proven that too much violence and obscene material in the adds lead to more violence and rape in the
society
because people start idealizing these adds sometimes and try to adopt that fashion and
type
of violence which is shown in the media on the name of adds. So,
its
it is
it's
a better idea that
media
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the media
would show
such
content
which is acceptable in that particular
society
.
Secondly
, every
culture
has its norms on which that
culture
is based. So, if we try to manipulate that
culture
with the norms of another
society there
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society, there
would be a chance that it spread anarchy in that
society
and mass killings spread because of that particular add which is showcased in the media.
For example
, Time magazine in 2016 surveyed on adds effect on
cultures
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the cultures
of the world and it came to the conclusion that if we limit our
content
of
adds
a public promotion of some product or service
ads
we will save
ourself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
from the incidents like Rawanda Mass killing etc. So in order to avoid any
angerness
partiality that is not fair or equitable
unfairness
in any
society its
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society, its
better to show that material which represents the
culture
of that
society
. To conclude, nowadays media
adds
a public promotion of some product or service
ads
are trying to enforce another
culture
on
people which
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people, which
is not acceptable to people of most cultures. And if we want to avoid any incidents its better to make strong policies and the media is bound to showcase only that material
that is
acceptable. Once these strict media policies are applied on the adds
,
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,
the popularity of
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a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
adds will grow in those people as well who
dont
do not
don't
like media because of its bold
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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