Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The best point for wealthy people is considered to helping others. In my opinion,

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

concur that the most valuable point

for

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of

earning money and getting rich is help people.

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, it can cause to entrepreneurship and growth

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connects a noun with the preceding word

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production and

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civil service. Rich people can make occupation

opportunaties

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

for others by constructing big companies, factories, institutes and

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, all companies need to fill

variety

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a variety

of job positions

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as managers, employees and

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into

alternative parts

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as administrative manager or financial manager.

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instructive construction projects need workers, engineers and

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these projects build by some materials

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as pipes, wires, cement and many others which need

factories

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factory's

proucts

commodities offered for sale

products

. On the other hands, these factories

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put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

employ

some workers. As well as build malls included with gym, food courts and other services by rich

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men

.It can make life easier for people. And people for using different services

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do not

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need to go to

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it helps

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with

traffic and air pollution. In conclusion, for making jobs for people and some benefits that can

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come to pass

occur

accrue

with enough money

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from

wealthy people which encompass all

comunity

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communities

community

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,

I

am agree

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agree

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