Environmental problems such as pollution and Climate variation are increasing nowadays the government have taken some measure at a global level but they only get some solution why is it so how can this problem be solved

Nowadays, area around issues are common in every
country
likewise
pollution
and
climate
change are rapidly grown up, while
government
has
duty
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a duty
the duty
to take some crucial decisions for the Intercontinental. There are many
hurdle
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hurdles
of
this
matter as well as
number
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a number
of a remedy.
Pollution
,
memeanehile
, introduced by local
peopl
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
peoples
. In many
country
people who habited to throw a rubbish here and there. For example person who always ate chocolate and wrapper of it throw away to the road or anywhere else
,
Accept space
,
However in
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However, in
some native land
government
decidee
reach, make, or come to a decision about something
decide
penalty
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the penalty
for throwing garbage and
also
have to declared find.It is
minor crime
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a minor crime
in many
state but
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states, but
states but
still
pollution
is increasing day by day.It is
responsibility
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the responsibility
of Management for awareness of people.It is
matter
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a matter
of countries development. So
government
should create seminar to the People's awareness.
Pollution
is directly affected
to
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by
the
climate
. Drought
,
Accept space
,
flood and rising sea levels are
common problem
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a common problem
in every
country
while people who responsible for it, They have no idea what type of mistake they have done
However
, After the
climate
, Humanity who suffer from
climate
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the climate
they have
rite
an abstract idea of that which is due to a person or governmental body by law or tradition or nature
right
to take
fund
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funds
funding
from the insurance company or
government
.
However
, A money is not
only way
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the only way
for
development
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the development
to
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of
into
country but
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the country, but
the country but
a country but
countries owner has to create a major law for reducing
pollution
and try to control the
climate
change. Over_all, Common person
are
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is
basic ledder
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a basic letter
basic letter
the basic letter
for controlling
pollution
and manage
climate
while,
Government
also
generate a rule book for the citizen.
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