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Environmental problems such as pollution and Climate variation are increasing nowadays the government have taken some measure at a global level but they only get some solution why is it so how can this problem be solved

#pollution #climate #variation #government #measure #level
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Nowadays, area around issues are common in every
country
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likewise
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pollution
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 and
climate
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 change are rapidly grown up, while
government
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 has
duty
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a duty
the duty
 to take some crucial decisions for the Intercontinental. There are many
hurdle
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hurdles
 of
this
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 matter as well as
number
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a number
 of a remedy.
Pollution
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,
memeanehile
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, introduced by local
peopl
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
peoples
. In many
country
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 people who habited to throw a rubbish here and there. For example person who always ate chocolate and wrapper of it throw away to the road or anywhere else
,
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,
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However in
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However, in
 some native land
government
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decidee
reach, make, or come to a decision about something
decide
penalty
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the penalty
 for throwing garbage and
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 have to declared find.It is
minor crime
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a minor crime
 in many
state but
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states, but
states but
 still
pollution
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 is increasing day by day.It is
responsibility
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the responsibility
 of Management for awareness of people.It is
matter
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a matter
 of countries development. So
government
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 should create seminar to the People's awareness.
Pollution
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 is directly affected
to
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by
 the
climate
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. Drought
,
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,
flood and rising sea levels are
common problem
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a common problem
 in every
country
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 while people who responsible for it, They have no idea what type of mistake they have done
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, After the
climate
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, Humanity who suffer from
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climate
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the climate
 they have
rite
an abstract idea of that which is due to a person or governmental body by law or tradition or nature
right
 to take
fund
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funds
funding
 from the insurance company or
government
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.
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, A money is not
only way
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the only way
 for
development
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the development
to
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of
into
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country but
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the country, but
the country but
a country but
 countries owner has to create a major law for reducing
pollution
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 and try to control the
climate
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 change. Over_all, Common person
are
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is
basic ledder
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a basic letter
basic letter
the basic letter
 for controlling
pollution
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 and manage
climate
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 while,
Government
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also
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 generate a rule book for the citizen.
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