Task 2: More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

As a living standards have been raised worldwide, people no longer worry about how to effort their basic

necessities but

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necessities, but

move on to another need of owning luxury brands of outfit, car and other items.

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essay will discuss whether it is good or bad one. There are several

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causes

why people nowadays are

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tending

to buy

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luxury

products.

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, since high-priced product

are usually had

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a good quality, many people, especially those coming from wealthy families, tend to spend a considerable amount of money for these goods. In fact, the garment, which purchase in the flea market, has a lower quality and durability than that in the well-known brands.

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, by owning a famous clothes, people will be fully confident because these express individuality and status.

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mean

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that only wealthy people could afford these items, which is highly beneficial in expanding relationship networks.

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many negative impact on the development.The

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problem is that many youngsters do not take it into careful consideration and often make impulsive purchases

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which may sink them into financial problems.

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, it is not uncommon to see a woman buying a dress that she never wears or a man buying a car that he uses only a few times a

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trend may result in increasing the

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rate. In fact, by wearing costly

jewelry

an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)

jewellery

on public, people could be susceptible to assaults as these items are an invitation for offenders to commit crimes

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contributing to a high crime rate in urban areas. In conclusion, on a whole, base on

above discussion

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the above discussion

, I agree that people desire for buying famous bands of clothes

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car has both pros and cons

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the merits will be outweighed by the demerits.