Task 2: More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
As a living standards have been raised worldwide, people no longer worry about how to effort their basic
necessities but
move on to another need of owning luxury brands of outfit, car and other items. Accept comma addition
necessities, but
This
essay will discuss whether it is good or bad one.
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First
, since high-priced product are usually had
a good quality, many people, especially those coming from wealthy families, tend to spend a considerable amount of money for these goods. In fact, the garment, which purchase in the flea market, has a lower quality and durability than that in the well-known brands. Suggestion
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Second
, by owning a famous clothes, people will be fully confident because these express individuality and status. This
mean
that only wealthy people could afford these items, which is highly beneficial in expanding relationship networks.
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trend also have
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problem is that many youngsters do not take it into careful consideration and often make impulsive purchases ,
which may sink them into financial problems. Accept space
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For example
, it is not uncommon to see a woman buying a dress that she never wears or a man buying a car that he uses only a few times a moth
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this
trend may result in increasing the criminal
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contributing to a high crime rate in urban areas.
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