Nowadays, a lot of buildings,such as offices and schools, are now being built with an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, Buildings with open

plan

design

has become most popular among most demographics of

this

century.

Although

it has

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(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many

several

positive

sights but

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sights, but

has

major negative issue

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a major negative issue

.

First

and

foremost

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foremost, everyone

everyone

wants to increase their houses and business. It's become a common trend for

everyone

. By

this

many people lose their everything, even these buildings take so many lives within a

second

. In 2012 Bangladesh has faced an unexpected death

planty

a full supply

plenty

. The building known as Rana plaza which was made by without any

plan

which become very harmful for the

country

. These buildings made by low

qualities

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quality

equipments. The building

making

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is made

authority granted for only ten floor's which is comfortable for

this

place but

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place, but

inventullay

after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

eventually

the owner of

this

building just wants to make more money only for

this

he did not follow the rules. After making the building it took only 5years and the property was

distroyed

spoiled or ruined or demolished

destroyed

by

lackings

the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable

lacks

lacking

of proper equipments and open

plan

design

.

This

insidence

the relative frequency of occurrence of something

incidence

stopped the

country

for a long time. About 1000 worker's gave their

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

lives

by falling building which was the highest after independent of Bangladesh.Every

year many

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year, many

people visit place to remember those people. With an open

plan

everyone

can make

buildings but

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buildings, but

these buildings

needs

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need

to follow the rules which

was given

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were given

by the government, And the government should

also

make a rule to control these unusual things which can take people life's and stop their family forever. The buildings should follow a rule which is safe for

everyone

. Sometimes

natural

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naturally

can

attacks

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attack

us as well as owner apartments for

this

every owner have to follow the rules.

For example

, In Pakistan, a building called Rajdhani which was made by following the

rules but

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rules, but

lacking of proper equipments, in a natural disease it fall down and by

this

many people lost their lives.

However

, despite some negative reviews there are

also

some positive overviews till day. In 1994 Americans made a bridge called

Brooklyn which

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Brooklyn, which

was made in

a

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an

open public place with

a

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an

open

plan

design

. For

this

the

country

is able to

makes

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make

money

from visitors those

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from those visitors

came to enjoy the beauty of

this

. They

also

earn money from their work's which is

took

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taking

a positive sight for their

country

. To conclude, Buildings with an open

plan

design

are

harmful but

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harmful, but

help to increase economic levels.