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Write a letter to apply for a position to look after a house in Scotland where the owners are going away. Provide personal details, what qualities you have for this position and ask for information.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to apply for the post of
the
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apply
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housekeeper in Scotland as advertised in the newspaper Tribune on 5th august 2019. My name is
farrukh
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Farrukh
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. I have recently completed my diploma in Hotel management. After completing
bachelors
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my bachelors
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, I found that there is
a
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apply
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stiff competition in the market so
i
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I
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 decided to go for masters in
same
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the same
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 field. The intake of the course is exactly after 6 months.
This
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 job fills the gap completely. I would like to tell you that I have
an exceptional communication skills
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exceptional communication skills
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 with patience. I enclosed my resume with
this
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 letter. Please let me know if you would like any extra information. I would
also
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 like to know
that is
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 there any pet at home because
i
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I
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 have an allergy
from
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to
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 animals.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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