Write a letter to apply for a position to look after a house in Scotland where the owners are going away. Provide personal details, what qualities you have for this position and ask for information.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to apply for the post of

the

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apply

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housekeeper in Scotland as advertised in the newspaper Tribune on 5th august 2019. My name is

farrukh

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Farrukh

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. I have recently completed my diploma in Hotel management. After completing

bachelors

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my bachelors

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, I found that there is

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apply

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stiff competition in the market so

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decided to go for masters in

same

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the same

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field. The intake of the course is exactly after 6 months.

This

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job fills the gap completely. I would like to tell you that I have

an exceptional communication skills

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exceptional communication skills

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with patience. I enclosed my resume with

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letter. Please let me know if you would like any extra information. I would

also

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like to know

that is

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there any pet at home because

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have an allergy

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animals.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

135 words

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Write a letter to apply for a position to look after a house in Scotland where the owners are going away. Provide personal details, what qualities you have for this position and ask for information.

The Greeting

Nowadays many countries household waste e.g. food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the causes for that? How can this problem be solved?

some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. to what extend do you agree?

Political dynasty is a form of political strategy, especially in developing countries. What problems does political dynasty cause, and what solutions can you suggest for governments and businesses to take?

all over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. this problem affects both children and adults. what are the reasons for this rise inn obesity? how could it be tackled?