Creative artists should be given the freedom to express their ideas (through words, pictures, music or films). However, some people think the government should impose certain restrictions on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People are divided on the opinion of the extent of the censorship in the media. While it is often thought that the
artisits
a person whose creative work shows sensitivity and imagination
artists
artist
should be free to show their creativity through writing, photographs, music or movies, I completely agree with those who believe that there should be certain limitations on media mass. One of the main reasons of implementing controls by
authorities
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the authorities
is the influence of these celebrities on their followers.
In other words
, individuals with artistic qualities posses the ability of
molding
the act of creating something by casting it in a mold
moulding
modern
the opinion of
masses
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the masses
in any direction they want, which can be used for negative purposes
.
Accept space
.
For instance
, smoking in movies by the
heros
a man distinguished by exceptional courage and nobility and strength
heroes
hero's
heirs
pursuade
win approval or support for
persuade
youth to adopt
this
habbit
an established custom
habit
habitat
as a fashion trend. Another issue is that sometimes the media personals promote harmful behaviour for the sake of publicity.
For example
,
nudeness
a painting of a naked human figure
nudes
and vulgarity in movies may distract the focus of teenagers from academics or healthy pursuits.
Thus
, movie makers, painters and musicians should not be totally free to
dipict
show in, or as in, a picture
depict
their ideas to prohibit them from instilling
detremental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
thoughts in the mind of their followers.
Last
but not least, motivating community ought to be the main focus of policy makers, which can be achieved by filtering the information. In fact, censoring content for providing better and correct material to the public is beneficial
for
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to
the whole society. In conclusion,
although
people may vary in their opinion about the limiting the
viewership
of certain form of
arts
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the arts
, I argue that there is a clear connection between the content that individuals enjoy and how they behave in life so it should be motivational and positive.
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