SOME PEOPLE FEEL THAT THERE SHOUD BE A FIXED PUNISHMENT FOR EACH TYPE OF CRIME. OTHERS FOT THAT THE CIRUMSTANCES OF AN OFFENCE SHOULD BE TAKEN IN TO ACCOUNT WHEN DECIDING ON A PUNISHMENT. DISCUSS BOTHE SIDES AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

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It is irrefutable that crimes are burgeoning day by day in every country. An army of masses

think

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thinks

that

punishment

should be fixed for all

kind

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kinds

of crimes. While, some people believe that circumstances should be analysed behind

crime

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the crime

till decide the

punishment

. I think that situations should be

first

consider

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considered

before

punishment

. I will discuss both view in

upcoming paragraphs

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the upcoming paragraphs

To begin

with, there are multifarious reasons that some people said fixed

punishment

should be given to all

kind

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kinds

of criminal activities. The

first

and for most reason is that crimes would be reduced.

For example

, if all minor and major crimes

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

people afraid to do crimes in their life.

Moreover

constitution

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the constitution

of the county would be strong. Due to

this

, reason development of nation can be seen and nation would become safe.

On the other hand

, looking towards reasons and situations of offender to give

punishment

necessary

Accept comma addition

necessary, for instance, if

necessary, for instance if

for instance

, if a culprit

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does

snatching

Accept comma addition

snatching, then

snatching them

then

government

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the government

should look the situation of his house that criminal belong from

poor family

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a poor family

that is

why he is attempting snatching activity. In

this

case, given capital or fixed

punishment

is not good

punishment

. Government should give a chance to criminal to realise his mistake.

Furthermore

, some time minor crimes are one

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with

children

Accept comma addition

children, such

such

as, firing in a crowded place which harm to public it does not mean

government

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the government

will give fixed

punishment

to children because children are not enough mature in early age they do not know about

outcomes

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the outcomes

of firing in public place. To conclude, not only positive results of fixed

punishment but

Accept comma addition

punishment, but

has

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have

detrimental effects

also

on criminal’s life.

That is

why government should not fix

punishment

for all kind of crimes

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