some people believe that children should study practical skills as managing a bank account, car maintenance, as well as traditional academic courses. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that an increasing number of people think that children usually learn academic subjects at
school
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but not many practical skills.
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, I strongly disagree with the notion that
school
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should teach children with only theoretical
knowledge
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as studying practical subjects
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as fixing cars and bank account maintenance are substantial for their future survival and job prospects.
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, having
knowledge
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about some hand-on practical skills can open doors for the part-time employment. Apparently, they can work simultaneously, to ease off the financial stress of their parents, and gain a tertiary education.
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,
majority
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the majority
a majority
of high
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students in India prefer to work as part-time trainees in their leisure time to fund their own graduation.
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, studying
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subjects is advantageous for children who study only until secondary
school
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. Even if they are unable to study afterwards, they can still get a job and survive comfortably.
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to
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, some learner
find
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finds
it difficult to concentrate on studies and
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, fail to acquire degree required for getting employed for company. For
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students, these skills can act as a survivor and they can earn their own livelihood.
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, one of my cousins was not able to complete his graduation even after several attempts yet he managed to establish his own own shop for the house maintenance since he was having
knowledge
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about the same.
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, the benefits of garnering
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skills are difficult to debunk. To conclude, both academic and practical
subject
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subjects
have their benefits for the children, but I believe that more emphasis should be given to topics which will be truly worthwhile in life.
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School
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The school
should not stuff children with only academic
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knowledge but
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knowledge, but
more importance should be given to everyday assistance.
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