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Governments should make people responsible for looking after their own local environment. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that, the
government
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 should take adequate measures to aware people about preserving their living
environment
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.
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 essay will argue why, the
government
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 has a huge role in
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 matter.
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 of all, most of the people are not aware of the environmental hazards.
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, there is a tendency to throw the garbages and litters into the public area, that leads to severe ecological problems. So, it is the prime onus of the authority to inculcate their citizens in order to know the aftermaths of throwing waste materials in the open areas by conducting awareness meetings for the public.
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, it is the joint responsibility of both governing authority and the public to make a clean
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. So that, the future generation's life will be more lively and healthy.
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, the world health organisation launched a project called clean
environment
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 that look into the future aspects.
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, the
government
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 has to implement laws to regulate the usage of
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 materials. In detail, authorities should have been impose huge penalty to the offenders. In
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 way we can prevent the usage of plastic materials in a sizeable manner.
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, some countries banned the usage of plastic, that are so hostile for the ecosystem.
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, recently, Kerala
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 banned plastic by regulating the law. In conclusion, the
government
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 can do a lot to conserve the
environment
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 by educating their citizens as well as imposing fine for the offenders and can ban some unfriendly materials.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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