The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
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Since the introduction of
first cars
in 1988 on British Roads, it is estimated that by the year 2000, there could be around 29 million vehicles. Suggestion
the first cars
This
essay agrees with the fact that alternative form of transportation should be encouraged and governing laws for ownership be introduced. This
essay will first
discuss the effect of increased
Suggestion
the increased number
number
of vehicles and secondly it
will discuss the need of certain governing laws for abatement.
The Accept comma addition
secondly, it
number
of vehicles plying on road
is increasing every year. Suggestion
the road
This
is contributed
to the fact that the economic growth is taking place and people are able to afford individual vehicles. Suggestion
has contributed
is contributing
contributes
However
, this
exponential rise in number
of vehicles has Suggestion
the number
also
rocketted
the any vehicle self-propelled by a rocket engine
rocketed
requested
recorded
green house
gas emission, responsible for global warming and climate change, as most of these vehicles derive their energy from fossil fuel. a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
For example
, the global carbondioxide
level surpassed 400 Suggestion
carbon dioxide
ppm
in comparison to that below 100 ppm before the industrial revolution.
A solution to this
problem lies on government regulations on individual car ownership. A shared taxi or a public transport which can ferry large
Suggestion
a large number
large numbers
number
of commuters is always welcome over individual
owned vehicles. Suggestion
individually
This
will not only alleviate the problem of carbon emission, but also
will solve the problem of traffic and timely reaching to one’s destination. For example
, a recent study conducted by the Indian Institute of Technology revealed that the solution to the air pollution in the city of Delhi is use
of public transport Suggestion
the use
instead
of individual cars.
In conclusion, it is seen that there is a tremendous growth in the number
of individual vehicles on British Roads. It is therefore
necessary to introduce alternative form
of transportation like public bus or trains and governing laws for individual ownership in order to check the problems of pollution and congestion.Suggestion
an alternative form
alternative forms
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