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the diagram illustrate the whole process of making plastic by recycling and by using raw materials lecture sugar which can father digested by bacteria in the soil to form carbon dioxide.

the diagram illustrate the whole process of making plastic by recycling and by using raw materials lecture sugar which can father digested by bacteria in the soil to form carbon dioxide.
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useful when the
harvest
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harvested
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 cereal
crops
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 arrived at
manufacturing
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the manufacturing
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 plant, they are examined and send to the glucose chamber.
Then
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 glucose cereal
crops
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 move towards the glucose chamber for fermentation, where they are fermented and the waste
are
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is
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 extracted from the
crops
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 which
is
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are
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 PSB polymer after collecting PSB polymer it moves to a plastic bottle
make
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to make
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 a machine which is generally used for storing shampoos and detergents. father
more
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apply
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all the plastic bottles are packed and
then
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 sent to the market for selling some of the
waters
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water
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 which are used are recycled
other
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in other
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 a landfill where oxygen products
released
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are released
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 slowly
in
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into
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 the atmosphere the rest of the bottles by
decrease
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a decrease
the decrease
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 or ban ultimately land sale and bad grades bottle produce carbon dioxide in
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
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, which father helps in the
crops
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 in growing
this
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 is how the whole process of plastic cycle run.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crops with synonyms.
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