Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Policymakers provide a

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of financial assistance to creative people. While some believe that artists can make people happy with their

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work, but

I believe mitigating people's basic needs should be prioritized over financing on artists. Artists are always people who try to make people feel good. But by being a professional artist like painter, musician, and magician, people earn a

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less. So, governments finance a

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of organizations that deal with artists. A survey published in "Monthly Charu" revealed that music teacher has least average pay scale among all the professions.

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, I believe that other sectors that deal with basic human needs like food, clothing, housing,

education

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, and health service availability need more financing. Some argue that basic human needs should be fulfilled

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first, then

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financing

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the other sector may come

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action. When basic biological needs are not accessible to 60% of people in the world, it is luxurious to spend resources on art or culture. In Somalia, the

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Ministry decided to spend

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38% of the budget in art

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while seven out of ten children

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have

no access to

education

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. So, mitigating the major needs

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.e., food,

education

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,

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continuing in the same way

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should be the priority rather than spending resources music production. In conclusion, governments around the world can spend a

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of

artists but

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artists, but

they should be aware of the fact that basic human needs are the

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thing to look at and mitigating issues relating to

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should be prioritized over any other thing.