Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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People tend to watch the films either on phones or tablets as they don't have much time to watch in a

cinema

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they choose

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to watch

it anytime like travelling or sitting at home which is more reliable than sitting in a

cinema

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for more than 2 hours

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the

films

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film

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makers put a lot of effort in making a

film

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the only profit they get is people watching it in a

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where the tickets are the main income for the

film

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.In olden days

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there was no other device to watch a

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either it has to be a

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hall or a television.

watching

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Watching

a

film

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just to forget all the stress and enjoy for 2 hours with fun and laughter it definitely takes you in an imaginative world watching of the

cinema

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with all the sound experience and few films the 3-d glasses gives us the real experience as we are present on the screen.And watching your

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

character on the big screen is a delightful feast for the audience.

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with the increasing

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technology, we

have the movies available online within few days of release and some online services like Netflix

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amazon prime provides us movies even though the

film

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is still running in the

cinema

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.With one subscription we can watch as many times we wish to and

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price is far less when compared to

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a group

of people who actually go and watch in a

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is the main reason why the people going out to watch a

film

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is decreasing gradually.As people choose to watch in a comfort

zone relaxing

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zone, relaxing

and watch at home. In the conclusion

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would say that for

good entertainment best way

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a good entertainment best way

to watch a

film

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is in

cinema

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with all the sound effects and the screen size which makes you feel the real experience of a

film

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