The following diagrams shows a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.

The following diagrams shows a current map of Peyton Park and plans for proposed changes.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparison where relevant.
As shown in the figure, the current map of Peyton
Park
has the
lake
in the canter.
Tennis
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The tennis
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court
to
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is to
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the west of the
lake
and the
picnic
area
to
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is to
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the north of the
lake
, the
picnic
area
is
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apply
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very close to the
tennis
court
. Both maps are showed the parking lot to the south
if
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of
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the
lake
. In order to more convenience to the tourists who come to Peyton
Park
, the
park
is proposed to do some changes. The
tennis
court
is planned to be relocated to the east of the
lake
, the
picnic
area
will be
moving
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moved
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to the north of the
tennis
court
. Located near the
picnic
area
will be a new playground, where the child can go playing. A swimming dock will be added
at
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the
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west of the
lake
.
Overall
,
significant
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the significant
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shift can be identified
after
this
replacement,
however
, the parking lot of
the
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apply
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Peyton
Park
remains unchanged.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, lake, tennis, court, picnic, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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