# You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter -advising them of your situation. -explain how this is affecting you. -request a new card.

Dear Blainey, I am Rajasekaran and I am a
student
of the Business Management department in your institute. I am requesting you to issue a new
Student
Identification
Card
and please allow me to explain my situation. A couple of days ago I have missed my ID when I was travelling back from my native place.
Then
only I have noticed that it is due to
overcrowd
Change the verb form
overcrowding

The verb overcrowd may be in the wrong form after the preposition to. Consider changing it to the gerund form.

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in the train and I searched my wallet in which I had money and
student
card
,
also
some of my valuable items
such
as ATM and Tax
card
etc
..
Replace the punctuation
.
...

This sentence ends with a double period. Consider changing the punctuation.

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I was trying hard,
however
, all effort was useless. It created some
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems

It seems that problem may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

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for me because my annual exam is starting in a few days and I have to carry the
Student
card
along with
Roll
Correct article usage
the Roll

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

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number slip so that I can give my exam. I promise that I will take care of
this
time. Thank you in advance. I hope you will understand my situation and do the arrangement as soon as possible.

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