Today, more and more tourists re visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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DESERT AND THE ANTARCTICA HAVE

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RULES FOR VISITORS SO THAT ENVIRONMENTAL DAMAGE TO THE ENVIRONMENT WILL BE

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ESSAY WILL DISCUSS

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AND CONS RELATED TO THE VISITORS DURING AND AFTER VISITING

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KIND OF PLACES. ON THE ONE HAND, VISITING THE HARD COUNTRY LIKE

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ARABIA HAS A MAJOR POSTIVE IMPACT ON THE TOURIST REGARDING THE RESPECT OF

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THE VISIT, PEOPLE LEARNS HOW ONE WOMAN

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WOMEN

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, 602 OF THE SOUTHERN PART OF INDIA LIVES THERE

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CULTURE TO INDIA.

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WOMEN

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SAFETY

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DECADE.

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REFRAIN THEIR SOME ACTIVITIES LIKE HANGING OUT FREELY AROUND THE CITY.

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FAMILY.

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CONSEQUENCES, FAMILY TRIP END UP WITH SOME PERSONAL STRESS AND UNFULFILLMENT AND AT SOME POINT THEY

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. FOE INSTANCE, 80% OF THE INDIAN FAMILY

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WITH THE SHORT TRIP TO SOME RESTRICTED COUNTRIES

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KIND OF COUNTRIES HAVE

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LAWS TO PROTECT THE NATION

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THAT

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THE CONVENIENT RULES SO THAT THE CIVILIAN CAN LIVE THEIR LIFE PEACEFULLY. IN CONCLUSION, NO TERRITORY IS WRONG WITH

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, TOURIST SHOULD THINK ND FOLLOW THE CULTURE AND TRADITION OF THE PLACE FOR THE TIME THEY STAY THERE.

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COUNTRY.

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