Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Parents are very touchy about their kids.
Therefore
, they purchase a lot of toys in order to make their children happy.
This
essay will discuss the pros and cons of
this
strategy using the examples of Oxford University research and Time Magazine survey to demonstrate points and support claims. On the one hand, purchasing l
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a large number
of toys have twofold benefits.
Firstly
, playing with toys will improve the toddler's analytical approach.
Secondly
, toys like building blocks provides them the opportunity to research more ways to construct a new thing.
For example
, Oxford University in 2016 researched that it is psychologically proven that l
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a large number
of toys help infants to mentally grow better as compared to those infants who play with few toys. So, it is clear from
this
example, that having more toys are beneficial for the child mental development.
On the other h
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hand, despite
its b
enefits there
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benefits, there
are few disadvantages of
this
strategy. As, children don't understand the importance of earning that how their guardians are earning money to purchase these toys.
Additionally
, having more toys m
ake
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makes
infants proud.
Similarly
, a survey of Time Magazine suggests the same story that 60% people dislike the idea of purchasing l
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a large number
of toys for their children as
this
makes their mind negative about other kids and they start hating them because they have few toys. So from
this
example, it is clear that toys sometimes develop negative b
ehavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in growing babies. To conclude, it is good that parents buy toys for their kids because of its countless benefits, but too many toys sometimes initiates negative attitude problem in toddlers. And it is
also
more appropriate approach that fathers and mothers link the toys with some task, that if you achieve that certain task, we will purchase a new toy for you.
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