You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Brown, I am writing to express my interest in working for the company for one semester in Vancouver, Canada, where is located our head office. The reasons

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my desire are related to the improvement of our technological system, since the West Coast branch has been using the OAT programme for three years,

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it would be easier and cheaper to introduce the system

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real experience while there. Regarding the duties of my position, I believe that my assistant Tiago, who has

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working for me for four years, is prepared to solve any issue that might emerge during these months.

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in the home-office system to assist him if we had any additional

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. Considering all the benefits to our sector, I would like to ask for your help to arrange a position for me there until the end of the fall, since it would be great

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the programme here

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year. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Cibele Sales

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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