You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear
Mr.
Brown,
I am writing to express my interest in working for the company for one semester in Vancouver, Canada, where is located our head office.
The reasons Change the punctuation
Mr
of
my desire are related to the improvement of our technological system, since the West Coast branch has been using the OAT programme for three years, Change preposition
for
consequently
it would be easier and cheaper to introduce the system Add a comma
,consequently
here after
having Correct your spelling
hereafter
this
real experience while there.
Regarding the duties of my position, I believe that my assistant Tiago, who has being
working for me for four years, is prepared to solve any issue that might emerge during these months. Change the verb form
been
Moreover
, I could also
work extra-hours
in the home-office system to assist him if we had any additional Correct your spelling
extra hours
problem
.
Considering all the benefits to our sector, I would like to ask for your help to arrange a position for me there until the end of the fall, since it would be great Fix the agreement mistake
problems
starting
the programme here Change the verb form
to start
next
year.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Cibele SalesSubmitted by bele_sales on
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