The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his
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chair. The 20th
century
made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our
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much easier. What should we expect in the 21st
century
? First of all, I think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using
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jet airplanes. Second of all, I believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. Computers will be everywhere including
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clothes. Many
people
will have chips and mini computers inserted in their heads to hold huge
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of information and have
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quick access to it. But what will be the most amazing thing in the 21st
century
is the flights to
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outer space and Mars that will be available to all
people
. Scientists say that Mars has many things similar to the Earth's.
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, they say that with the help of modern technology
people
can artificially create conditions that will allow
people
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constant basis.
To sum up
, I am sure that many amazing changes will be brought by the 21st
century
.
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, I think that with the help of
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contemporary
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people
can do many things that were
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difficult to imagine a
century
ago. So, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to imagine all
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that will happen in the next decades.

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