Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Computers and internet have globalized the professional job market, and allowed many people the ability to
work
from
home
. While some believe
this
development is not beneficial and should be prevented, others, including myself, think that working from
home
is a positive development and should be strongly encouraged. Working from
home
is beneficial for the
worker
, because it permits
flexebility
the property of being flexible; easily bent or shaped
flexibility
in his working hours and provides him
the ability
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the ability to work in
work
in a friendly and relaxing environment.
Initially
, people who
work
from
home
are not
rquired
necessary for relief or supply
required
to drive to
work
,
hence
they have more free time early in the morning for personal affairs,
such
as going to the gym or spending time with their family and children. As a consequence, employees are happier and are more compliant with their
work
.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, some workers prefer to
work
during the night, and by permitting them to
work
outside of the office, they can utilize the time where they are most efficient.
Last
, people who
work
from
home
are situated in a familiar environment, that contributes to the quality of their
work
.
This
fact is especially important in positions
such
as mathematics and physics, where the
worker
is required to be concentrated for long periods.
Asid
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Aside
from the above mentioned advantages for the employees, there are
also
several benefits for the employers, when allowing people to
work
from
home
.
Initially
, it is financially preferable
for
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to
employers when employees
work
from
home
, because it reduces the need for office space and technical supplies given to the
worker
.
Also
, employers are not required to pay for transportation and food for the
worker
, which reduced the
mothly
of or occurring or payable every month
monthly
expences
amounts paid for goods and services that may be currently tax deductible (as opposed to capital expenditures)
expenses
expense
even more.
Last
, people who
work
from
home
are more dedicated to their
work
place and change jobs less than others.
This
fact has been shown in Israel, where people who
work
from
home
remained in their
position
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positions
for more than three years
in
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on
average, as opposed to other workers who changed
thed
pointing out something
that
the d
the
their job every two years.
This
demonstrates that working from
home
increase the
resposibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
and dedication of
worker
and improve their quality of
work
. In conclusion, I believe that working from
home
is a positive development, both to the
worker
who gains the ability to use his daily hours better, and for the
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
who earns a better quality of
work
.
home
Suggestion
Home
working should be cherished and promoted.
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