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High stakes English language tests, such as the IELTS, are increasingly being delivered on the computer Do the advantages of computer-based testing outweigh the disadvantages?

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The request for English language test has increased because of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 various
need
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needs
 like education, migration and employment. The IELTS
for instance
, is done on computers.
This
 essay will explain why the advantages outweighs the disadvantages.
Firstly
, one of the
advantage
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advantages
 of taking the web English test is because of its convenience.
Although
, the demand of experience workers with good communication
to
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in
 some foreign countries is high and may require some people to have several
try-outs
trying something to find out about it
tryouts
threats
traits
 before they get a desire score.
For instance
, those interested in migrating to Canada will need at least an eight band in all four subjects before they are qualified.
On the other hand
, it can be time conscious.
This
 will enable the student to fast track before
examination period elapse
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the examination period elapse
.
For example
, during the writing task
two
in the direction of
to
to to
 it is required to keep to
clock
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the clock
.
Secondly
, the disadvantage can be alarming. System virus can affect assessment that can lead to loss of data. Information can be easily wiped off if affected by malware
this
 can be
disastrous especially
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disastrous, especially
 when analysis scores are not saved.
This
 can lead to lack of trust on the examining body. Another demerit is the strain the screen resolution can cause to the eyes. Many
has suffered
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have suffered
were suffering
 from the constrain and will not like to take chances to
further
 damage. Conclusively, the pitfall can be
discouraging but
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discouraging, but
 the good side goes a long way in various conditions. In my opinion, the merits supersede the troubles because, the trials are only for a specific term that will not lead to any major difficulty.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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