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Nowadays, in many countries chemicals are used to produce and preserve food. Are the advantages of this use overweigh the disadvantages?

#countries #chemicals #food #overweigh
In
modren
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
 life
food
prodcution
the act or process of producing something
production
 tend to make it more processed than natural
.
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natural
Suggestion
Natural
 means pure
however
ptocessesd
subjected to a special process or treatment
processed
food
 has many chemicals to keep it fresh for
longer period
Suggestion
a longer period
longer periods
 of time and
minimaize
make small or insignificant
minimize
minimizes
 the coast. Countries are using chemicals for trading seek
.
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despite
Suggestion
Despite
 the fact it can cause more harm than good.
hence investment
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Hence, investment
Hence investment
 in the people is the key word of countries
devolpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
 and
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
successes
.
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.
however health
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However, health
However health
 care plays
majer
of greater importance or stature or rank
major
Major
rolse
the actions and activities assigned to or required or expected of a person or group
roles
role
race
 in
this
 aspect
.
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 chemicals should be
elimanited
terminate, end, or take out
eliminated
 of the provided
food
 to boost people health and energy level or even
averge
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
 age of
living person
Suggestion
a living person
 can be
extend
Suggestion
extended
 to
he
that male; objective male pronoun
him
 longer.
thus doctors
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Thus, doctors
Thus doctors
 today insist to
spead
distribute or disperse widely
spread
spot
 the idea of
food
 and heal or kill
!
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!
Ofcourse
Suggestion
Of course
this
countine
continue a certain state, condition, or activity
continues
continue
continued
 to be improved by
reschares
a scientist who devotes himself to doing research
researchers
rescuers
 and tests every day. At end countries around the world
shoul
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
should
 really consider passing laws against adding harm
chemacils
relating to or used in chemistry
chemicals
 to
food
.
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