Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education in a general is the

first

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priority of the most governments in the nations.

the

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The

mintry

religious ministers collectively (especially Presbyterian)

ministry

of education in many countries

continuosly develop

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continuously develops

continuously develop

programes

a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished

programs

programmes

to improve and enhance the level of education.

one

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One

of these programs is a literacy of all adults. In

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essay, I agree that the governments should allocate all the

resourese

available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

resources

required to erase the

illilteracy

the ability to read and write

literacy

of young people. The reason behind that the governments

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have

to pay attention to

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issue is the benefits that will gain from supporting

this

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program. One of these

benifets

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

, it will

reduse

cut down on; make a reduction in

reduce

refuse

reuse

the unemployment people and give them an

opprtunity

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunity

to contribute and build

thier

of them or themselves

their

community.

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for

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For

example, Japan has

decleard

made known or openly avowed

declared

officially in 2015 that

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

reach to zero level of

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matter. The

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

has

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have

to be aware of

advanatages

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

of educating the ignorant. On the

onther

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

another

entire

hand, by looking closely to the countries that are

ignoring

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ignored

and avoiding helping

adults

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adults'

adult's

ability to read and write, they are

suffring

a state of acute pain

suffering

from high levels of unemployments. Obviously the developing countries are

strugeling

engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity

struggling

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with

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issue comparing with developed one.

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for

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For

instance, if we compare Al

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Yaman

Yemen

with Canada, we can easily notice the

diffrance

the quality of being unlike or dissimilar

difference

differences

of educated people between the two countries. In

concclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

conclusions

, governments shall do

what ever

one or some or every or all without specification

whatever

required procedures to ensure that

thier

of them or themselves

their

there

young population has a capability to read and write.

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essay

has prove

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has proven

that doing so will

payback

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pay back

to the

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government's

not only the money spent but

alos

in addition

also

sociaty

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

creative spirit.