It's generally believed that success in fields such as art and sport can only be achieved if a person has natural talent. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or artist. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Today, most of the society claims that success in any field is directly proportional to luck. Even, few schools of thought are usually debating about a child’s natural talent According to them if someone has a good and sound mind to become an
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. Being an Artist, a painter, designer or a singer is more often a natural skill of an individual but, every profession needs Natural talent polishing to enhance your abilities. By polish we mean, to acquire knowledge of that specific profession. Studying the history of Art and crafts can lead someone to recognize the important aspects and significance of Arts. As far as the field of Sports in concerned,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • natural talent
  • innate ability
  • genetic predisposition
  • nurture
  • nurturing
  • develop
  • cultivate
  • foster
  • encourage
  • inherit
  • unravel
  • reveal
  • demonstrate
  • evidence
  • proof
  • counterargument
  • counter
  • overcome
  • compensate
  • arguably
  • debate
  • controversial
  • persuasive
  • convincing
  • conclusive
  • critical
  • essential
  • crucial
  • vital
  • significant
  • prominent
  • noteworthy
  • imperative
  • compulsory
  • fundamental
  • compelling
  • persuasive
  • support
  • favor
  • oppose
  • disagree
  • acknowledge
  • consider
  • claim
  • view
  • belief
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