the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the Uk from 2001 to 2008

the chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the Uk from 2001 to 2008
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The chart illustrates the proportion of
women
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,
children
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and
men
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who ate five
portions
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of
fruits
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and
vegetables
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each day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008.
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, it is very noticeable that the percentage of
women
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who ate the given amount of
fruits
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and
vegetables
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was much higher than
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men
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of men
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and
children
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. It was
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noticed that in 2006 the number of people who consumed the five
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was the highest
among
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the eight years between 2001 and 2008.
In contrast
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, 2001 was the lowest year people ate
vegetables
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and
fruits
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in it. In 2001, the percentage of
women
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who used to
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the
portions
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was about 20%,
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it was 17% of
men
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and 12% of
children
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.
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, these numbers started increasing steadily
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the proportion of
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and
children
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until
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reached
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peak in 2006. In that year, approximately 40% of
women
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, 27% of
men
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and 23% of
children
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used to eat at least five
portions
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of
fruits
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and
vegetables
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daily. After 2006, a very slight decrease in the numbers was observed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, children, men, portions, fruits, vegetables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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