In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions in this?

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summary is at the bottom of each essay. The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which prove how sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. From the

ancient

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History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles to participate in the games, to the more recent international disputes, when athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences, compete peacefully and even embrace each other after an event.

Moreover

, these popular events have called the world’s attention to the terrible consequences of wars;

thus

some leaders have tried to reach agreements to end their disputes and live peacefully.

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, international sporting events show benefits in some developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war.

For example

, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education, hunger, crime, poverty and corruption which leads to an immense embarrassment of being Brazilian and a low self-esteem.

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, when the Football World Cup starts, the Brazilian squad, which is considered the best team in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all their problems and even the criminal activity decreases. They

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, wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national flags.

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, the competition brings families and

neighbors

a person who lives (or is located) near another

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together and even rival gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully. In conclusion, popular sporting events play an important role in decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feelings as history has shown.