Some people believe that the libraries are a waste of resources and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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It is a moot point that whether libraries are replaced with computers or not. Some people think that they are wastage of economical resources of nations while others hold opposite view that libraries are prominent infrastructure of any country. I
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support l
atter view
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the latter view
as they preserve wide cluster of knowledge.
Firstly
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, Libraries are responsible of wasting g
reat deal
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a great deal
of money, according to former opinion holders, as construction of its building, m
assive resources
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the massive resources
of reading material require g
rand budget.
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a grand budget
The Governments raise funds to accomplish libraries in society.
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, salaries given to librarians, caretakers, security guards and maintenance are extra load on economy of c
ountry.
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the country
Computers,
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, are deemed as money saving sources of reading because individuals can satiate their desires of reading by just a few clicks of the computer.
Nevertheless
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, libraries are considered as important infrastructure of any nation which save huge amount of material in w
ritten
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writing
context for future generations and
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, helps too to save any language.
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, Chinese language has its own alphabets, vocabulary, words which are learnt b
y
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from
books saved in libraries.
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, libraries
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create s
ource
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sources
of income for some people
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as librarians, accountants or authors who sells their books to libraries. In fact, some of them earn through the memberships of daily visitors. In conclusion,
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c
omputers saves
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computers, save
computers save
b
ulky amount
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the bulky amount
a bulky amount
of data and can reach f
astest
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the fastest
to their u
sers but
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users, but
they cannot take place of libraries because they save resources for years and
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adds income to the growth of countries.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • repository
  • cultural hub
  • community engagement
  • digital divide
  • inequality
  • sustainable
  • affordability
  • technological advancement
  • information retrieval
  • hybrid resources
  • social interaction
  • evolution of libraries
  • complementary
  • access to information
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