Some people feel paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers with relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

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As much as we know the celebrity life is one where confidentiality is a luxury, people always want to have details of your life even your private moments. In my view,
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cherish
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how people feel about
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the paparazzi
invade the privacy of celebrities through pictures and why others feel
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is a price for fame. The life of a celebrity is one that lacks a lot if privacy because of popularity, fame and the attention it brings. I believe prying into their private lives is extreme and doesn't give them
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the opportunity
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example, when popular musicians or movie stars go on dates, get pregnant
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go to rehabilitation centres for health reasons the media is quick to pick details of
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because the notion is people always want to know
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private matters and should only be disclosed if they choose
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, some people think that
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is the price they pay for being popular,
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is a genuine reason for the lack of privacy which the celebrities have come to accept and adjust as part of their daily
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life
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example when
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some random photographer snaps them in a shopping mall, an unpopular person would randomly do
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and
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won't be much of a big
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deal, but
just because a person who is popular is shopping
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is all over the news. In conclusion, whether paparazzi should invade the private lives of celebrities or
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a price they have to pay is debatable, in my opinion the media stop taking pictures of celebrities everywhere so they can live their lives, That being said I would agree that they have to come to terms with
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as they have no choice but to
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