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Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree?

#car #usage #cities #vehicles #city #centre
To begin
 with, Most Countries have
free
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a free health care system, but
a free health care system but
health
 care
system
 but to what extend is
this
system
 able to
carter
give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance
cater
 for emergencies and new emerging diseases and human sicknesses. Undoubtedly, the
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
system
 in most countries only
carter
give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance
cater
 for basic
health
 needs of the
people but
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people, but
 may not be able to handle complicated
health
 needs of the people which may be expensive to provide for free by the government of any country.
In addition
, every human in a country deserves to have access to both basic and latest medical
treatment
Suggestion
treatments
.
Also
Accept comma addition
Also, this
this
 should be the focus of any government asides free education and the cost should be built into yearly budgets of countries. Admittedly,
this
 would increase the capital and recurrent expenditure assigned to
health
 care by the
government but
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government, but
this
 should not deter the provision because it has to do with human life which should be valued. To conclude
, I agree every
Suggestion
, I agree with every
 human should have access to free
health
 care
system
 to enhance their span of living.
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