Increasing car usage in many large global cities has caused a number of problems. Some cities have proposed banning private vehicles from the city centre. To what extent do you agree?

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To begin

with, Most Countries have

free

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a free health care system, but

a free health care system but

health

care

system

but to what extend is

this

system

able to

carter

give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance

cater

for emergencies and new emerging diseases and human sicknesses. Undoubtedly, the

healthcare

Suggestion

health care

system

in most countries only

carter

give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance

cater

for basic

health

needs of the

people but

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people, but

may not be able to handle complicated

health

needs of the people which may be expensive to provide for free by the government of any country.

In addition

, every human in a country deserves to have access to both basic and latest medical

treatment

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treatments

Also

Accept comma addition

Also, this

this

should be the focus of any government asides free education and the cost should be built into yearly budgets of countries. Admittedly,

this

would increase the capital and recurrent expenditure assigned to

health

care by the

government but

Accept comma addition

government, but

this

should not deter the provision because it has to do with human life which should be valued. To conclude

, I agree every

Suggestion

, I agree with every

human should have access to free

health

care

system

to enhance their span of living.

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