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Should children of 2 to 5 years be exposed to television advertisements?

#children #years #television #advertisements
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Known for its adverse
effect
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 on mental
health
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, Television advertising directed toward youngsters should be prohibited. While television advertisements have a lot to offer for children like fancy toys, fascinating gadgets, and funny cartoons, those advertisements cause serious problems in children's perception of ideas.
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 effects range from mental disorders to changes in behaviour toward children's surroundings. At
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, advertisements would seem to stop
baby's cry
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the baby's cry
 due to their seemingly attractive
nature but
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nature, but
 after a while,
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 an advantage would start to fade and show the consequences. The most common
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 is considered to be time a
kid
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 spends watching a TV
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 of doing creative things- solving puzzles, building a
kid
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's house, drawing, painting etc.
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 an
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 would look negligible
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at
 the
kid
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 is still in his early ages and would ultimately learn all those things after 2 or 3 years, it can make the
kid
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 consider
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 an entertainment more important than any other factor on the priority list.
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 to
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effect
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, another consequence would be overall
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health
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healthier
healthy
. One of the most common example of it would be a
kid
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 who watches television advertisements all day
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due to their addictive nature) would not like to play outdoor games even in his future because he has been exposed to
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 an environment.
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 would greatly compromise his physical
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 as well the social relations for the exact same reason: less exposure.
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,
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 advertisements would greatly
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effect
have an effect upon
affect
 the eyes and could cause permanent damage. Medications from
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 an early age would be detrimental to the
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's
health
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. In summary, it can be argued whether TV advertisements have positive
implications but
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implications, but
 what cannot be argued are the consequences that come with them.
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, it is important to keep prohibit children from watching TV ads from an early age.

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