Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

In our current tech-savvy world
,
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,
news available
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news, available
on the internet getting
increasing number
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an increasing number
of online readers than ever before. Over the
last
few years, there has been a constant debate whether newspapers can sustain as the most
curical
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
critical
cortical
origin of news over online news. Despite there are numerous flaws about
source
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sources
of news published on the internet
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
personally tend to believe that news at online would
recongnize
accept (someone) to be what is claimed or accept his power and authority
recognize
recognise
recognized
as the vital source of news over
newpaper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reliable
  • credible
  • focused
  • immersive
  • tangibility
  • tradition
  • access
  • digital devices
  • demographics
  • older generation
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