Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While many people believe that one who is stuck in a dire situation should come up with it,

on the contrary

, others have a promising tenet which there exists in every circumstance. I am of the opinion that believes we should strive for life since it is worth to contend the conditions. On the one hand, some people support a school of thought that expresses everybody has to make the most of a bad situation. In terms of their job, they fear being made redundant, knowing without work their condition would be worse, and so they tolerate low pay, hostile work environment, long hours and a lack of promotion opportunity. Looking from a financial perspective,

for instance

, imagine an individual who lives in the postwar situation which we all know how devastating and painstaking could be. From factual point, war-torn countries experience a low economic status and their nations have lost their families and relatives, so it could be cruel to suggest them that do not give up and keep trying to better

this

disastrous circumstance while they may just be able to fight for their own survival or that of

their rest of family

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the rest of their family

their rest of the family

.

For example

, how we can show a ray of hope to a working mother in a single-parent

household which

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household, which

is often short of money and has to face the challenge of supporting a family when doing a tiring job.

On the other hand

, there

is

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are

a vast majority of people that argue against others who believe in preordained fate and occasions.

This

optimistic group,

on the contrary

, shares the opinion that it is

favorable

encouraging or approving or pleasing

favourable

to improve

unfavorable

not encouraging or approving or pleasing

unfavourable

conditions mainly because it affects mental health.

This

implies that everybody should rise above negative circumstances,

such

as limited funds, well as, the hostile and unsatisfying ambiance in the workplace or even being stuck in a nerve-racking job.

Hence

, improving the disappointing occasions would boost our mental

frame thereby

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frame, thereby

, reducing depression and death through suicide. To recap, there are some superstitious beliefs and religions,

accordingly

, they have their own patrons who believe that every occasion occurs for a reason and sake

that is

preordained,

in contrast

, to my humble opinion I think it would appear wiser if every person makes

effort

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an effort

efforts

the effort

to improve every detrimental state. It seems full of sense of life if we consider it necessary to overcome apathy and defeatism and to pursue an optimistic path.