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What is your opinion in the use of speed limits on vehicles to prevent accidents and other methods.

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In order to reduce accidents on our roads, some people believe that introduction of speed limits on vehicles will go a long way, while others think there are more effective measures. On the one hand, it is known to all that excessive speed on our highways may lead to accidents and I agree with
this
 because it will be difficult to avert a car crash when on high speed as the driver in
such
 condition has less control over the vehicle.
For example
, in a situation where one of the front tyres of an automobile in motion bursts, the speed of the car at the moment will determine whether the driver would apply the breaks or move until the car naturally slows down its momentum.
This
 could be dangerous and with
this
 reason, it is advised to maintain
regular speed
Suggestion
a regular speed
 on the highways.
On the other hand
, some believe other measures can be taken to achieve better results like; enforcement of laws that will penalize people who are not qualified to drive when caught driving and
also
 banning vehicles that are not road worthy from being used. Others still suggest that maintenance of our roads and elimination of pot holes could prevent disaster on our roads. In summary, while people have different ideas on
best ways
Suggestion
the best ways
 of keeping our roads safe, I'm of the opinion that
reduction
Suggestion
the reduction
 of maximum speed
on
Suggestion
of
 vehicles is a sure solution.
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