The maps below shod road access. Summarise and make comparisons

The map illustrates some changes that made in the City Hospital
area
. It is seen that there have been some infrastructure works between the years of 2007 and 2010. It is noticeable that there were three main changes that were made in the City Hospital
area
, which were the building of the bus station, new roundabout and new parking space. Looking at the
first
figure, we see that there were three bus stops on the both sides of Hospital Road in 2007, but later these were removed and a new bus stop
that is
bigger than the old ones that has two connections with two new roundabout for cars was located on the west side of the Hospital Road in 2010. The
second
main change was two new roundabouts; the
first
one is at the intersection of Ring Road and Hospital Road, the
second
one is at the intersection of City Road and Hospital Road.
Moreover
, it is seen that the changes were
also
made to the staff and public car space. In 2007, there was a common car space for the public and staff, which was situated to the east side of Hospital Road, but later a change was made, and
this
area
was reserved for only employees. For the public, a new car park
area
was added on the east side of City Hospital in 2010, and an access to there made possible through Ring Road.

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