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Some people believe that robots will replace classroom teacher in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that human
teachers
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 will be replaced by
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artificially intelligent
teachers
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 in the foreseeable future.
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, I disagree with
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 statement because of various factors. At the outset, the prediction of the replacement of
teachers
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 by robots would not be possible because of unnecessary investments. To hire the services of advanced robotic technologies, a big chunk of money will be required.
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, human educators will be available at relatively cheaper wages.
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, robotic
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 might
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 from a lack of flexibility. It is because they would not be able to understand the emotional state of their students. Having controlled by their internal processor, these machines could deliver longer lectures without accessing the learner's interest level.
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, contemporary scientists are still struggling to inculcate emotional intelligence in robots.
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, there will be a human resource problem with the introduction of robot
teachers
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 in the institutes.
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 all the teaching work
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 taken from
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machines, there may be unemployment problems for humans.
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, the revolution of automatic machinery in factories caused
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 a scenario during the 1960s. What is more, pupils may not outperform
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 less interest in their
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approach. It is witnessed that students perform better in their curriculum, where they have a mutual understanding with providers. By opening their hearts to their
teachers
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, they can grasp the knowledge efficiently. Varying grades in academic subjects are a good example of
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 that depicts the effectiveness of interest level in a particular teacher that would not be possible in
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 of A.I. Robots. In conclusion, it is argued that the need for human
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 will be demolished
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 Robot tutors.
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factors
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 as cost, rigid teaching methods, unemployment and
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 levels are the main
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 for my disagreement with the above-said notion.tion.

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