The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same to periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table given illustrates the
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before and after the refurbishment of the Correct your spelling
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. The two pie charts provide insight into the results of the survey that portrays the satisfaction of the visitors of the Use synonyms
museum
during the same two periods.
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after the renovation rose drastically. The results of the survey indicate a major increase in Use synonyms
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who were very satisfied and a dramatic decrease in the Use synonyms
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who were dissatisfied.
The revamp of the Use synonyms
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as the Use synonyms
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visiting the Use synonyms
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before the refurbishment was 74,000 and it transformed to a striking 92,000 Use synonyms
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when they visited the Change preposition
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after the renovation and a surprising 35 Use synonyms
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people
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the same.
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people
who gave no response in the survey remained the same.Use synonyms
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