The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same to periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table given illustrates the

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number

of the

overall

population visiting the Ashdown

musuem

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museum

before and after the refurbishment of the

museum

. The two pie charts provide insight into the results of the survey that portrays the satisfaction of the visitors of the

museum

during the same two periods.

Overall

, the

number

of

people

visting

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visiting

the

museum

after the renovation rose drastically. The results of the survey indicate a major increase in

people

who were very satisfied and a dramatic decrease in the

people

who were dissatisfied. The revamp of the

museum

resulted in an increase of 18,000

people

as the

number

of

people

visiting the

museum

before the refurbishment was 74,000 and it transformed to a striking 92,000

people

afterwards. The pie charts

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a clear rise in the satisfaction of the

people

. 20 more

people

were satisfied

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when they visited the

museum

after the renovation and a surprising 35

less

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people

were dissatisfied

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the same.

Also

noteworthy is the fact that even after the renovation of the

museum

, the

number

of

people

who gave no response in the survey remained the same.